Verrain's story

Janny Wurts Chat Area: Other books and Short Stories: Verrain's story
   By Janny Wurts on Saturday, February 17, 2018 - 05:56 pm: Edit Post

To Hellcat, if you are still subscribed:

and to all in general, I have been a very busy bee. Verrain's story - a novella, is up to 96 manuscript pages, with only the finale scene yet to go. I expect to finish the draft in the next day or so.

Then polish and decide whether to submit it, whether to send it out to become part of a boxed set offering, or whether to post it up on the Paravia site straight away.

The title is The Gallant, and there is LOADS of fun insight into Atheran back history, pre-rising, and before the Mistwraith's conquest.

In case you're worried: yes, I am still working hard on Song of the Mysteries....I had a few decisions regarding presentation to resolve; and this story has been hanging fire, two thirds done, for literally YEARS. I felt it was time to polish it off, and the ideas (about how I wanted to present the ending) finally decided to co-operate with the muse.

So you will have another slice of Athera to play with while you endure the wait for the final volume.

Watch this space.


   By Auna on Sunday, February 18, 2018 - 10:43 am: Edit Post

Great news! I selfishly want it right away, but do what works best for you!


   By Annette on Thursday, February 22, 2018 - 05:14 pm: Edit Post

Looking forward to getting to read it one day.


   By Janny Wurts on Sunday, February 25, 2018 - 01:48 pm: Edit Post

I have a completed draft on this one - will be taking my time polishing it off, though, since the main focus must be Song of the Mysteries.


   By Jeff on Tuesday, February 27, 2018 - 04:08 pm: Edit Post

I'll enjoy another back story. I can't imagine what will be revealed!


   By Dorothy on Wednesday, February 28, 2018 - 01:56 pm: Edit Post

Ah, Verrain,how I have missed you!


   By Alissa on Thursday, March 01, 2018 - 08:15 am: Edit Post

I love the back stories! Can't wait :D:D:D


   By Janny Wurts on Saturday, March 10, 2018 - 01:03 pm: Edit Post

This is standing at 108 manuscript pages, in draft.

I am messing with 'chapter' breaks for it.

Would you rather LONG segments, or short ones???

Never done a mid length work like this before. Who's familiar from other platforms?


   By Annette on Saturday, March 10, 2018 - 03:34 pm: Edit Post

Long segments would be fine by me.


   By Htet Htet Aung on Saturday, March 10, 2018 - 03:57 pm: Edit Post

length doesn't really matter much. Whatever length works.


   By Xepheus Shazar on Sunday, March 11, 2018 - 03:15 am: Edit Post

Personally, I think you should use whatever length of "chapter" or "segment" works for the book itself, i.e. whichever style of break reflects or reinforces the effect/message you are attempting to convey to your readers. Hope that is of some use to you, Janny.


   By Auna on Monday, March 12, 2018 - 03:33 am: Edit Post

I doubt epic fantasy readers care about chapter length as long as the cutoffs make sense. Shorter chapters can make the pacing feel faster and I know that technique is used by some newer thriller writers. Go with what feels best.


   By Janny Wurts on Monday, March 12, 2018 - 03:23 pm: Edit Post

Didn't know that, re, how thriller writers are doing it - helpful to know, thanks for posting this.


   By Auna on Tuesday, March 13, 2018 - 06:01 am: Edit Post

You can check out the Look Inside on Amazon for any of Lee Child's Jack Reacher books to see how short his chapters are. And that's for full length novels.


   By Alissa on Thursday, March 15, 2018 - 06:05 am: Edit Post

I usually prefer longer chapters, or at any rate not too short ones, if the story is complex it feels more fragmented to me than fast paced. Then of course it depends on the number of PoVs.
I agree with Xepheus Shazar on this.


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